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My special memory

  Last winter I and my younger brother went to a round the Europe trip. it was second times that we went to a trip abroad. when I was a high school student and he was a middle school student, we went to Bangkok, Thailand. It was a our first abroad trip. at that time we didn't prepare for the trip and study about history, culture. we didn't know preparation is really important. we just had felt happy. but this europe trip was different. I prepared for everything which was hotel, flight, food, history etc on my self. now I know preparation is very important in advance. we always searched a lot of information about our trip, before we started the trip. our plan was that we went to UK, France, Italy, Germany etc. I think the best one of them is Praha, Czech. Normally Prague is famous for night vies for tourists. I also had sawn night view's pictures. so I didn't have expectation. but when we arrived prague and saw night view, we were surprised. it was really beautiful. I couldn't explain about my feeling. as we stayed in prague, It was christmas season. we took a lot of pictures which looked like paintings. thanks for that I could see czech's night view at christmas. also I can't forget Paris, France. when I was young I thought 'if I go to europe, I must go to Paris.'. Paris's symbol Eiffel tower, I wanted to see it with my own eyes. finally I went to Paris. but first time I was disappointed. Paris was really dangerous and dirty. it was different from pictures. but Eiffel tower was the same. it was really magnificent. I was deeply impressed. I didn't know what kind of feeling. when I stayed in paris during six days, I went to Eiffel tower everyday. when I saw Eiffel tower, it was always different impressions. since I have gone trip, this europe trip is the best memory for me. during one month, sometimes my feeling was bad and tired. but I hadn't sawn special places that gave energy to me. this trip's memory will make me and my brother happy for a long time.

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 My special memory

  Last winter I and my younger brother went to a round the Europe trip. It was second times that we went to a trip abroad. When I was a high school student and he was a middle school student, we went to Bangkok, Thailand. It was our first abroad trip. At that time we didn't prepare for the trip and study about history, culture. We didn't know preparation is really important. We just had felt happy. But this Europe trip was different. I prepared for everything which was hotel, flight, food, history etc on my self. Now I know preparation is very important in advance. We always searched a lot of information about our trip, before we started the trip. Our plan was that we went to UK, France, Italy, Germany etc. I think the best one of them is Praha, Czech. Normally Prague is famous for night vies for tourists. I also had sawn night view's pictures. So I didn't have expectation. But when we arrived Prague and saw night view, we were surprised. it was really beautiful. I couldn't explain about my feeling. As we stayed in Prague, It was Christmas season. We took a lot of pictures which looked like paintings. Thanks for that I could see Czech's night view at Christmas. Also I can't forget Paris, France. When I was young I thought 'if I go to Europe, I must go to Paris.'. Paris's symbol Eiffel tower, I wanted to see it with my own eyes. Finally I went to Paris. But first time I was disappointed. Paris was really dangerous and dirty. It was different from pictures. But Eiffel tower was the same. It was really magnificent. I was deeply impressed. I didn't know what kind of feeling. When I stayed in Paris during six days, I went to Eiffel tower everyday. When I saw Eiffel tower, it was always different impressions. Since I have gone trip, this Europe trip is the best memory for me. During one month, sometimes my feeling was bad and tired. But I hadn't sawn special places that gave energy to me. This trip's memory will make me and my brother happy for a long time.