In this essay, I want to talk about how to be successful in college life. I believe there are three achievements that we should achieve in college life which is having good social life, staying healthy, and getting good grades. Even though, we all know it is best to achieve all three, time is limited and achieve two is hard enough. Us college student should realize that we cannot achieve all three so we should focus at least two.
  First important goal we should achieve in college life is having good social life. In Korea, most of the college student enjoy drinking. This does help socializing with others in college, but one thing we should know is people get hangover after drinking which affects the next day of drinking. This hurts students grades and of course it damages people's health. Socializing is one of the most important factor in college life, but over doing it can actually be the obstacle of achieving two or more goals in our college life. So what can be the best solution of achieving social life? I believe finding activities that people can do together with friends is the best way. I'm not saying drinking is bad. I'm just warning that drinking too much can bring down your grades and hurt your health.
  Second, us college students should keep up our grades. Our job is to study as a student and it is our duty. At times we all abandon our duty and only focus on "Fun Stuff". Board Of Education recommends at least 2 hour of study outside of school each week for 1 unit. Most of college students in Korea takes about 18 units and that adds up to 36 hours of studying outside of class which is excluding the lecture hours. 36 hours itself may look too much, but if you think about it, if you put it in a week its only about 5 hours a day. Of course on weekdays, we all have class and we may not have time at home. But if you use time between classes wisely, it isn't that hard to cover up 36 hours. I believe us college students all know that studying is time consuming so we shouldn't complain about getting bad grades but instead, we should put more time in to it. I believe that is the only solution to get a good grade.
  Last but not least, staying healthy is the most important factor in college life. Studying and socializing consumes a lot of energy. It is both time consuming and at times we need to stay up late to study and socialize. That is the reason why we should workout and stay in shape. Health can affect our college life crucially so we should try our best to stay healthy and get enough mixed-nutrition.
  It is hard to stay healthy at the same time. get good grades and have a good social life. But if we plan our schedule and follow the schedule we should be able to have a successful college life without a doubt. Last thing I want to emphasize is: try your best to divide your time and use your time wisely. Don't waste your time. Time is limited source like money and time is more valuable than gold.

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  In this essay, I want to talk about how to be successful in college life. Being successful in college life is challenging. I believe there are three achievements that we should achieve can help lead to success in college: life which is having good social life, staying healthy, and getting good grades. Even though, we all know it is best to achieve achieving all three is preferred, time is limited, and achieve achieving two is hard enough. Us We college students should realize accept that we cannot might not achieve all three so we should focus and be satisfied with at least two.

  The first important goal we should achieve in college life is having a good social life. In Korea, most of the college students enjoy drinking. This does can sometimes help socializing with others in college, but one thing we should know is remember people can get have hangovers after drinking which affects the next day of drinking studying. This can hurts students’ grades and of course it damages people's students’ health. Socializing is one of the most important factors in college life, but over doing it can actually be the an obstacle of to achieving two or more of our goals in our college life. So what can be is the best solution of for achieving having a good social life? I believe finding activities that people can do together with friends is the best way answer. I'm not saying drinking is bad. I'm just warning that drinking too much can bring down your grades and hurt your health.

  Second, us we college students should keep up our grades up. Our job is to study as a student and it is our duty as students is to study. At times we all abandon our duty and only focus on "Fun Stuff" fun stuff. The Board Of Education recommends at least 2 hours of study outside of school each week for per 1 unit credit hour. Most of college students in Korea takes about 18 units credit hours, and that adds up to 36 hours of studying outside of class which is excluding the lecture hours. 36 hours itself may look seem like too much, but if you think about it, if you put it in divide it among a week, its only about 5 hours a day. Of course on weekdays, we all have class and we may not have time at home. But if you use time between classes wisely, it isn't that hard to cover up find 36 hours. I believe us we college students all know that studying is time consuming, so we shouldn't complain about getting bad grades. but Instead, we should put more time in to into it. I believe that is the only solution path to getting a good grades.

  Last but not least, staying healthy is the most important factor in college life. Studying and socializing consumes a lot of energy. It is both time consuming and at times we need to stay up late to study and socialize sleep depriving. That is the reason why we should workout and stay in shape. Health can affect our college life crucially, so we should try our best to stay healthy and get enough mixed-nutrition eat a well-balanced diet.