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Should the government spend more of the federal budget on public parks and playgrounds or museums and art galleries?
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 It is debatable whether the government should spend more budget on public parks and playgrounds than on museums and art galleries. This is an intriguing question because opinions concerning this issue can be different depending on the individual perspectives, In my opinion, however, I support that government should invest more on public parks and playgrounds for the following reasons.

 First of all, investing more on public parks and playgrounds will help people to build a good relationship with each other. To be specific, while exercising in public parks and playgrounds, we can meet various people and enjoy some activities with them. Building relationships is a great way to develop social, interpersonal, and communication skills. To illustrate Bill Gates, wo is the founder of Microsoft, has made great accomplishments in his lifetime. I read online that he was very successful because he was able to build meaningful relationships as well as networks with people. He did this be enjoying some activities in park with his neighbors. Therefore, this proves that if governments spend more budget on public parks and playgrounds, people can learn to embrace relationships.
 Second, it will be good places for people to relieve their stress and be healthy. As many people today are busy with their life full of tasks and responsibilities, they have less time to enjoy their hobby. Therefore, if the government invests more budget in public parks and playgrounds, people can do some physical activities in near park or playground, and stay healthy, both physically and mentally. For example, when I was in first grade in high school, because there were no places to do some activities I couldn’t exercise in my spare time. However, when I became third grade, a new playground was built near my school. Therefore, I could work out with my friends there and we strengthened our body. Through this experience, I realized that building public parks and playgrounds is important. Hence, this shows that the government should invest more on public parks and playgrounds.

 In conclusion, I firmly believe that the government should spend more budget on public parks and playgrounds than on museums and art galleries. All things considered, it is my belief that my argument regarding this topic has been effectively and precisely delivered with the reasons mentioned above. Never should we forget this issue may have a huge impact on our future.

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 It is debatable whether the government should spend more of the federal budget on public parks and playgrounds than on museums and art galleries. This is an intriguing question because opinions concerning this issue can be different depending on the individual perspectives. From my personal perspective, I believe that government should invest more on public parks and playgrounds for the following reasons. 
 First, investing more in public parks and playgrounds will help people have a place to go to when they are trying to meet new people. To be specific, while exercising in public parks and playgrounds, we can meet various people and enjoy some activities with them. Building relationships is a great way to develop social, interpersonal, and communication skills. To illustrate Bill Gates, who is the founder of Microsoft, has made great accomplishments in his lifetime. I read online that he was very successful because he was able to build meaningful relationships as well as network with people. He did this by enjoying some activities in park with his neighbors. This is a great example of how people will benefit if government spends more of the federal budget on public parks and playgrounds.
 Second, they will be good places for people to relieve their stress and be healthy. As many people today are busy with their life full of tasks and responsibilities, they have less time to enjoy their hobby. Therefore, if the government invests more of the federal budget in public parks and playgrounds, people can do some physical activities in near park or playground, and stay healthy, both physically and mentally. For example, when I was in the first grade in high school, there were no places to do some activities I couldn’t exercise in my spare time. However, when I entered the third grade of high school, a new playground was built near my school. Therefore, I could work out with my friends there and we got stronger. Through this experience, I realized that building public parks and playgrounds was important. Hence, this shows that the government should invest more on public parks and playgrounds.

 In conclusion, I firmly believe that the government should spend more of the federal budget on public parks and playgrounds than on museums and art galleries. All things considered, it is my belief that my argument regarding this topic has been effectively and precisely delivered with the reasons mentioned above. Never should we forget that this issue may have a huge impact on our future. 

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